2016高考英语短文改错汇编

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2016高考英语短文改错汇编篇一:2016年高考英语真题分类汇编 专题09 短文改错(解析版) Word版含解析

2016年高考试题分项解析之专题9短文改错

1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错(10 分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(?),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。学科&网

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

【答案】

1. that →where2. but去掉 3. had →have 4. honest→ honesty 5. or→ and

6. using →used7. becoming前加of8. the →a 9. our→ his10. stead→steadily

【归纳总结】在英语中though、although、while或者as等引导的让步状语从句不和but连用;连词because不和so连用;此外,return不和back连用。

3. had →have 考查动词时态。 文章是介绍现在的情况,应该用一般现在时。

4. honest→ honesty 考查名词。此处是指诚实是他成功的秘诀,用名词形式。 而形容词honest意思是“诚实的”,是指人的性格特点。

考点:考查短文改错

2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

【答案】

1.how改为what 2.chose改为choose 3.take改为taking4.but改为and 5.about后加the

6.your改为our7.knowledges改为knowledge8.删除can或can改为should

9.thought改为think 10.many改为much

【解析】

试题分析:考查记叙文,“我”和同学们对暑假的旅游计划的讨论。

6.your改为our 考查代词。应该使用our与本句的主语we保持一致。句意:如果我们出国旅游,我们就拓宽视野并学到书本上学不到的知识。

7.knowledges改为knowledge 考查名词单复数。本句中名词knowledge是不可数名词,没有复数形式。

8.删除can或can改为should 考查虚拟语气。动词suggest作为建议的时候,后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气“(should)+动词原形”,所以本句可以删除can或can改为should。

9.thought改为think 考查时态。本文介绍我和同学们商量暑假旅游的事情,全文以一般现在时为主,所以本句使用现在时think。

10.many改为much 考查代词。本句中代词much代替不可数名词much money作为动词cost的宾语,而many通常代替可数名词复数形式。

【名师点睛】

高考短文改错考点层次一般而言可依次分为词法的测试、句法的测试和语篇的测试三个层面。考点层次越高,就越能测试出考生运用语言的能力。低层次的考点往往侧重于语法方面的考查,而高层次的考点往往侧重于考生对文章意义方面的理解。

一、词法改错

词法的测试包括:定冠词和不定冠词的用法;名词的单复数和名词的所有格;动词的时态、语态、语气,情态动词和非谓语动词等;人称代词、人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等的用法;介词的搭配;并列连词、从属连词的用法;形容词、副词的区别以及比较级和最高级的用法;固定搭配和习惯用法。

例如:本题中的

5.about后加the 考查定冠词

7.knowledges改为knowledge 考查名词单复数

10.many改为much 考查代词

二、句法改错

句法的测试包括:主谓语在数上的一致性;名词性从句、定语从句和强调句;句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性和逻辑性。

例如:

1.how改为what 考查特殊结构。

2.chose改为choose 考查句子结构

3.take改为taking 考查并列结构

8.删除can或can改为should 考查虚拟语气

三、语篇改错

语篇的测试包括:上下文的时态是否一致;上下文中的代词指代是否一致;上下文中的逻辑关系是否一致。

4.but改为and 考查连词

6.your改为our 考查代词和逻辑关系

9.thought改为think 考查时态

考点:考查短文改错

3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

【答案】

51.year—years

52.worse—worst

53.the去掉

54.yourself—myself

55.such—so

56.tell—told

57.freely—free

58.wear—wearing

59.to—for

60.I ∧

need

55.such—so考查so/such的用法。 my parents didn’t seem to think so我的父母似乎不这样认为,so指代上一句的内容,故把such改为so。

56.tell—told考查时态。通篇回忆过去的事情,使用的一般过去时,故把tell改为told。

57.freely—free考查形容词副词。be后跟形容词构成系表结构,be free from...摆脱......,不受......的影响,故把freely改为free。

58.wear—wearing考查固定搭配。by是介词,意为“通过”,后跟名词/代词或动名词,故把wear改为wearing。

考点:名词;形容词;代词;介词;最高级;固定搭配;时态

【名师点睛】

改错中动词、连词以及上下文语境也是出题者经常会考虑的出题知识点,其解题方法如下:

1.动词错误的发现与解决

英语中有许多的短语动词,是很难从字面上判断其意义的。其中与介词构成短语的动词是最常

2016高考英语短文改错汇编篇二:2016高考英语短文改错荟萃

2016高考英语短文改错荟萃

第一套

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling,

It is great pleasure to write to you. I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A few days before, I listened to a radio programme about you. Now I know that you teach English at home and in others countries before you started writing books. I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep, so you worked on them for five years. That was a very much difficult job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you. I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for spending time read my letter.

Yours sincerely,

Michele

第二套

Last week, there was a program calling “Learning to Respect Our Parents” in our school. That is known to us that respect for one’s parents is one of Chinese traditional moral value. And most students nowadays are “the only child”. We often think of themselves as the centre of their family.

As for the program, eight “dos” have worked out for the students to follow. For an example, we are advised to remember our parents’ birthdays. Beside this, it is necessary that we should also tell our parents what we are going to do when we go out. The program has been such successful that it has been high praised by many people.

第三套

One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided that we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they

would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.

第四套

There was a rich man who carried many treasures to the distance to look into happiness. But after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasant and said, “Happiness is very simple: put down and you’ll be happy!” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.

第五套 I’ve learnt from the notice that you’re looking for an English editor for us school paper.

I’m written this letter to apply for the position.

I’m Li Hua, Senior Three student in our school. In my view, I met your requirements:

for one thing, I’m willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another,

I’m good at both English or Fine Arts. I’m either skilled in using computers. I would be glad

if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

I’m looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

第六套

A woman was taken to the hospital. While having an operation, she had a nearly

death experience. Seeing God, she asked how this was it. God said,” No, you had another 40 years.” On recovery the women decided to have a plastic surgery. She had someone change her hair color, thinking since she had so many time to live, she'd better make full use from it. Finally she got out of the hospital. While crossing the street, she killed by an ambulance speeded by. Arriving in the front of God, she demanded,“They said I had

another 40 years!” God replied, “But I didn't recognize you.”

第七套

One day, some children were playing hide-and-seek while they heard a boy names Tate shouting. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me!” They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn’t do that. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you.”

In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can’t swim. Help!” The children didn’t believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.

第八套

Recently I have done a survey on the hobbies of the 1,500 students in our school.

The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments in their spare time because it can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. What surprises me most is the number of the students paid much attention to reading and doing sports is smaller. Each only makes up for 12% , although one is a best way to gain knowledge and the other to keep fit.

Therefore, many students are strongly advised to take on reading as knowledge is power. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.

第九套

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a

speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

第十套

Last Friday, I learned a lesson about telling lies. Early in morning, I didn’t want to go to

school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off work to look for me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the true. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit to me. I felt so regretfully for telling lies. I had wasted anybody’s time. Finally, I admitted I had lied and promised never to do it again.

短文改错参考答案

第一套

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling, a books

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reading

Yours sincerely,

Michele

【语篇解读】本文是应用文,作者写信给J.K.罗琳,表达自己对她的崇拜,以及期望自己

成功的愿望。

1. 【命题立意】考查冠词。

【试题解析】“great”的前面需用冠词a。

2. 【命题立意】考查名词。

【试题解析】根据“all”可知,“book”需用复数。

3. 【命题立意】考查副词。

【试题解析】几天前应该用ago。

4. 【命题立意】考查动词。

【试题解析】此处应该用过去时,表示以前曾经教过英语,teach的过去时为taught。

5. 【命题立意】考查形容词。

【试题解析】“countries”需用“other”修饰。

6. 【命题立意】考查代词。

【试题解析】此处代词替代的是上文提到的第一本书,故用单数代词替代。

7. 【命题立意】考查副词。

【试题解析】“very”修饰形容词,“very much”修饰动词。

8. 【命题立意】考查固定短语。

【试题解析】此处考查固定短语be proud of。

9. 【命题立意】考查形容词。

【试题解析】become在此句中为系动词,后面应该用形容词而不是副词。

10.【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。

【试题解析】此处考查固定短语spend time(in)doing something。

第二套

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【参考答案及解析】

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5. 【语篇解读】本文讲述了在学校开展尊敬父母的活动并取得很大成功。 【命题立意】考查非谓语动词。 【试题解析】calling与其所修饰的词program 之间是被动关系,故改为过去分词 【命题立意】考查主语从句中的形式主语。 【试题解析】此句为主语从句,形式主语用it,后接由that引导的真正主语 【命题立意】考查名词单复数。 【试题解析】one of表示其中之一时 后面要用名词复数,故用values 【命题立意】考查连词。 【试题解析】上下文是转折而不是并列。 【命题立意】考查代词。

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2016高考英语短文改错汇编篇三:2016年全国各省市高考真题分类汇编 英语 短文改错题

2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试

英语科试题短文改错题一览

课标卷-1

第一节 短文改错(10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(?),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I love. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

答案:

71. that →where72. but去掉73. had →have74. honest→ honesty 75. or→ and

76. using →used 77. becoming前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily

课标卷-2

第一节:短文改错(共10小题,每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

答案:

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课标卷-3

第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best

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浙江卷

第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删减或修改某个单词。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多着(从第11处起)不计分。

When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet het at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!

My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.

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第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival, it’s popular in China now.

Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritiest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mom was grateful and moving. 答案:

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