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短文改错l'm篇一:短文改错

短文改错

高考英语短文改错题要求考生判断一篇短文中十行(自1995年以来)文字是否有错,如果有错误就将其改正。此题型旨在测试考生发现、判断并改正短文中错误的能力,以及考查考生准确运用词法、句法、行文逻辑等的综合能力。

本题型侧重考查考生的词汇和语法基础知识,但并不是单纯的知识检测,而是考查考生在阅读的过程中运用语法知识解决实际问题的能力。

纵观近几年高考短文改错,不难发现其设题方式比较固定:正确为1个,多词或缺词共计3个,错词为6个,其比例为1:3:6。

下面引用近几年的高考题来分析一下此题的三种错误类型:多词、缺词和错词。

一、多词

1.多冠词

(l)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacherin the crowd.

【解析lsight是不可数名词,且catch sight of是固定搭配,意为“看见”。

(2) For e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.

【解析】,am为不可数名词,泛指时前面不用冠词。

【知识拓宽】

(1)不可数名词表示泛指时不用冠词。

Modern people know more about the health, havebetter food,and?

(2)与by连用的交通工具及air,land,sea等名词前不用冠词。

by bike骑自行车,by sea由海路,乘船

(3)有些名词(如school,class,hospital,church,prison,bed,table,town等)与相应介词连用,表示进行和这些词直接相关的活动时,前不用冠词。

___ _去上学,_______坐牢,_______在吃饭

(4)球类运动、棋类游戏前,不用冠词。

___ _打篮球,_______下棋

(5)mo。t副词作“非常”解时,前面不用定冠词the。

She is most pretty.她非常漂亮。

(6)。。或though引导让步状语从句,构成倒装结构,前置的单数名词前不用任何冠词。

Child as he is,he knows a lot.虽然他只是孩子,知道的却很多。

2.多介词

(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit China in next yeaL

(2)We practice for three times every week..

(3)So l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作时间状

语的名词短语前多了介词。

(4)?but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.

【解析】talk about意为“谈到??”,是及物动词短语,后须接介词宾语,但根据本句语境,此处不必接宾语,故去掉about。

【知识拓宽】

(1) last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名词词组直接充当时间状语,前面不用介词。

(2)有些动词在汉语中是不及物动词,在英语中却是及物动词,由于受汉语影响,可能多一个介词。

serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with Tom in amatch(画线介词多余)

(3)有些表示地点的副词,其意义中已包含to,如果再加to,则多余。

on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(画线介词均多余)

(4)有些副词或介词词组后加另一个介词,构成复合介词,若后面没有介词宾语,介词则多余。同样,有些动词短语是“动词十介词”结构,若后面没有介词宾语,介词则多余。

①If you won’t go,I'll go instead of.(画线介词多余)

②She listened to but heard nothing(画线介词多余)

(5)有些动词或形容词后接名词或代词时,须加一个介词,但接从句时,必须去掉介词。

①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(画线介词多余)

②I am sorry for that he won't come(画线介词多余)

3.词义重叠

(1) Whenever I see them l will often think of myEnglish teacher.

【解析】在whenever l see them这一时间状语从句后再用often显得重复,应去掉。

(2) 1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意为“整个周末”,再加上all,词义重叠。

【知识拓宽】

(1)有些词受汉语影响,多一副词或介词,造成词义重叠。

return back回来,repeat again重复,flee away逃走,enter into进入,blue color蓝色,stop down停下来,raiseup举起来,unpack open打开

(2)定语从句中的一个名词,已由关系代词取代,再用其替代词是多余的。

I do remember you having apologized to the old lady Imet her last week

(3)单音节的形容词或副词比较等级加-er.-est,多音节加more、most,但二者不能同时重叠使用。

As a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.

4.出现冗言现象

(l)Today l visited the Smiths-my first time visit toan American family.

【解析】本句中的first修饰visit,visit此处为名词,意为“我的第一次访问”,time多余。

(2)Now I can't watch much television,but?【解析】根据上下文,此处应是“我根本不能看电视”,因此受汉语影响,多了much,造成冗言。

【知识拓宽】

(1)状语从句与主句之间多一并列连词。

①Though he tried his best, but he failed.

②The more he has, and the more he wants.

(2)充当状语的介词短语与主句之间多一关系代词或关系副词。

①In the last five years that they have climbed churches一②?in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...

(3)充当状语的分词与主句之间多一并列连词。

Sitting down,and he began to work.

(4)从属连词后多一个that。

She was absent from the meeting because that she was ilL(5)复合宾语前多一个that。

I found that her lying on the ground.

5.固定搭配中多词

(1)I was used to watch it every night.

【解析】此处属于used to do与be used to两个固定搭配的误用,应去掉was,取“过去常常”之意。

(2)?in any other words,Iam only a child.

【解析lin other words为固定搭配,意为“换句话说”,而any other意为“任何别的??”,与本文上下文不符。

6.行文逻辑上多词First, let me tell you something more about myself.

【解析】由first可知是刚开始向别人讲述自己的故事,故只能说something,而不能加more。

二、缺词

1.名词前缺限定词

(1) Each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the team.the【解析】此处应加上the,特指“球队的队长”。

(2) The day before the speech contest^Englishteacher talked to me.my【解析】根据上下文分析,此处English teacher是有所指的,指的是“我的”英语老师,故加上my,表达一个更确切的概念。

(3)I'1I take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday. a【解析lwish sb.awonderful time为固定搭配,意为“祝某人玩得愉快”。

【知识拓宽】

(1)在“so+形容词十可数名词单数”结构中,名词前不能缺a或an。

This is so good a book that we will buy it.

=This is such a good book that we will buy it.

(2)little,few表示肯定时,前面不能缺a,意为“一些”。

如a little water,但是“每隔几分钟”应说成every fewminutesa

(3)有些不可数名词(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等),表示“一种”“一个“一份”时,应加上a或an。

Work is a pleasure to me.

(4)“the+姓氏复数”表示一家人时,the不能省。

The Browns like to go skating.

(5)表示“两者之中比较??的一个”时,比较级前应加the。

He is the taller of the two boys.

(6)在句中可数名词不可单独使用,前面应有限定词,如his,that,Tom's,the,a等。

When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook^head. his2.缺动词不定式符号to(1) I'd like very much^come but I have anexamination on Monday morning. to【解析】like后面不能直接加动词,需加to,构成固定搭配“would like to do”,意为“想做??”。

(2)一.and will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的状语,不定式符号to不可省。

【知识拓宽】

(1)不定式作后置定语,不定式符号to不能省。

But then there are always more mysteriesAlook into:_____to

(2) -般说来,两个实义动词不能并列使用,中间常用to连接。

①7Ihe World Health ()rganization and other organizationsare workingAimprove health all over the world_____to

②i had always wantedA retum to the village _____to

(3) feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。。rv。等动词变成被动结构时,充当主语补足语的不定式不能省去to。

Little Tom was made to do heavy work

(4)为了避免重复前面的动词,后面的不定式常常省略,但要保留不定式符号to。

We wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to

3.缺系动词

(l)neyA eager to Imow everything about China:.'were【解析】eager为形容词,必须加系动词构成系表结构。

( 2)What^ your favourite sport?IS【解析】本句缺谓语动词,应加is。

( 3)I'd like to^ your pen-friend, and. be/become【解析】本句考查I'd like to do结构,根据上下文,必须加上系动词。

【知识拓宽】

(1)由于受汉语语法规则的影响,有些形容词作表语时,常常缺少系动词。

She is afraid of her boss.

(2)在被动结构中,由于缺少助动词,变成了主动语态,造成错误。

?and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick up.been4.缺介词(l)We must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of为固定短语,意为“而非,而不是”,后接宾语。

(2)?but the others spent a lotA time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定习语,意为“许多,大量”,后加宾语。

【知识拓宽】

改错题对介词的考查,重点是一些固定搭配,再如:

WhenI have free timeI go^along walk..for,因此,同学们在学习和复习中应牢记一些固定搭配。

5.缺连词In one class,l learned^ it rained.why【解析】本句因缺连词而造成句子成分残缺,只有加上why,句子的意义才完整。

【知识拓宽】

(1)在汉语中,分句与分句之间往往不用连词,但在英语中却不行。

It began to rain,^ they had to stop working. and

(2)受母语影响,几个同类词并列连用时,它们之间往往缺一连词。

CDi told Mother, Father, Sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time I had.and②He looked inside but saw nothing.

(3) that引导的主语从句置于句首时,that常常不能省。

That light travels in straight line is known to all.

(4)引导同位语从句的连词that,when等常不可省。

(DThe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.

②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if,even though,as if'as though等短语中,第二个连词不能少。

He walks as if/though he were drunk

三、错词

1.可数名词单复数误用

(l)They were eager to know everything about Chinaand asked me lots of question

(2) We study quite a few subject, such as maths,Chinese, English and physics.

(3) We practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on TV together.

(4) She said that she and my schoolmate' all.wishedme success,.

(5)?so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___

短文改错l'm篇二:最优化的短文改错训练10篇

(共l 0小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词:在错词的下面画一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原文没有错的请不要改。

I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people lost hearing. I'm sure it has already happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave aparty, she does have to invite the rest of the street. Everyonecan dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist hasdiscovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyzed with its

legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor someday.

66.__________ 67. __________ 68. __________ 69. __________ 70. __________ 71. __________ 72. __________ 73. __________

74. __________ 75. __________

(共l 0小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正: 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:原行没有错的不要改。

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, student from Class Three,

86. _________

Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and do some voluntary

87. _________ work. On their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warm welcomed,

88._________

and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.

89._________

Then, they started working once, cleaning the windows and the floor.

90._________

Everything done, they sat in the yard chatted with the elderly people.

91._________

When there was time for them to leave, the elderly people thanked

92._________

them their kindness. They said it was so beautiful a day that t(转 载 于:wWW.ZHaoqT.nEt 蒲 公英文 摘:短文改错l'm)hey

93._________

would remember forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.

94._________

How they did has brought joy to others and eiched their own lives.

95._________

(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分 )

此题要求对一段文章改错。先对每一行做出判断是对还是错。如果是对的,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如果有错误(每行不会多于一个错误 ),则按情况改错如下: 此行多一个词,把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词,在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词,在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:原行没有错的不要改。

When Mr. and Mrs. Smith went to theatre, they left their 76. ___________ German dog to guard his home. When two burglars broke 77. ___________ into and the burglar alarm rang, the dog was waiting for them. 78. ___________ Unfortunately, one of the burglars was dog-lover, and he 79. ___________ quickly made friends with it. While the alarm was ringing,

but the burglars were stealing cash and jewelry, worth over80. ___________ $10,000, from a safe, the dog laid down in his basket and went 81. __________ to sleep. When the police arrived twenty minutes later, the 82. __________ burglars had gone. The dog was proud guarding the empty safe. 83. ___________ When the first detective entered into the room, it immediately 84. __________ attacked her, tearing her trousers and bit her in the leg. 85. ___________

(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾( √ );如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正: 此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

),在该行右边的横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Most of world’s diamonds come from Africa, but there66. ________

is one place in Arkansas, America that they are found.67. ________ They were first found there in 1906. About 50 thousands 68. _______ diamonds that have come from this field. A 40-carat diamond 69. ________ was the large ever found in North America. But most of the

70. ________

stones were too small to be mined. Soon all mining stop there.71. ________ A few diamonds have been found in the sand and broken stone 72. ________ along the Great Lake, either. This is not where they first formed. 73. ________ They may have been formed far to the north and were carried

74. ________

south by the last great glaciers. 75. ________

短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:

该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),大该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意:原行没有错的不要改。

Li Wei, Tang Ling and I are good friends.

In order to express our respect, we decide to give a present to all of our mothers on Women's Day The gifts were all made ourselves Li Wei painted the picture of a big bucket full of thank and happiness. Tang Ling'sgift was a pigeon making of coloured paperwhich carried a note in its mouth, says, "Wish you peace and health all your life!" I made a card, on which there it was a red leaf, referring to my heart. Our mothers were all pleased while they received the gifts.

短文改错l'm篇三:高中英语短文改错,附答案

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

改错二

I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

改错三

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

改错四

Dear Bob,

Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,Li Hua

Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them, there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

改错六

Dear Li Ming,

I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.

改错七

Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.

改错八

One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen.When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(独木舟) and was struggling in the water.Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy. He was about to drag(拖) the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge. One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”

答案:

改错一:who's 改为whose 2.正确 3.去掉but 4.on改为in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改为homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改为found 9.immediate改为immediately 10.fire前加the

改错二: the改为a 2.正确 3.see前加to 4.go改为going 5.去掉been 6.

去掉had 7.去掉but

8.去掉had 9.on改为at 10.him改为her

改错三:1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改为been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改为feelings 当情感讲时feeling常用单数 5.study前加to或study改为studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改为watch 9正确 10.and改为or

改错四:1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。2. to 后加 be 或 become。3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情, 此处用 more 不合逻辑。4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中, 关系词在从句中作主语, 故用 which。5. 此行无错。6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”, 修饰可数名词复数。7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知, 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in?为固定短语, “对??感兴趣”。9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。

改错五:答案:

76.去掉to 短语错误。go abroad“出国”。

77.present→presents 名词的数错误。present“礼物”,是可数名词。

78.去掉第二个were 动词错误。interest在此是及物动词用法,意为“使??感兴趣”。be interested in“对??感兴趣”。

79.buys→bought 时态错误。由全文可知,用一般过去时态。

80.√

81.them→it 代词错误。在这本书里有关于肢体语言的图片和不同国家的语言习俗。用it指代这本书。

82.put前加been 语态错误。我的礼物被放在了你的卧室里了。礼物是被放在卧室里,所以用被动语态。

83.that→which 定语从句关系词错误。介词后用which,不用that。

84.but→and 连接逻辑错误。前后是并列关系而非转折关系。

85.few→little 混淆错误。a little 与 little 可以用作副词, 表示“有点”“稍稍” ,修饰动词、副词、形容词或介词短语。如:He is a little tired.他有点累了。而a few不可用作副词。

改错五 1.have去掉2.about后的you改为me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning

5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改为but 8.be后加an

9.at→in 10.where后加there

改错六41. about→with/to 根据句意,可知此处是表达“和父母交谈”,而不是“谈论父母”。

42. as→even if 意为“好像”,与句意不符;根据句意,此处应是表达让步关系。故用even if ,意为“即使”。

43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短语,意为“和…相片融洽”。

44. √

45. way→ways some在此处修饰可数名词复数。

46. walk前加a go out for a walk意为“出去散步”

47. and→or 此处表选择关系。

48. are→were “他们年轻时候”应用动词的过去式。

49. our→their 和they保持一致。

50. honesty→honest 形容词honest 作表语。

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