短文改错新题型

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短文改错新题型篇一:短文改错新题型

短文改错新题型专题训练一

1. 下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。

1.

The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of I’m on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.

In the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow. 2.

Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the manager’s office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldn’t help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.

3.

It s a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I' d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.

A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silent.I smiled to him and let him come.

After a while, he began to cry.Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened.He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her.At the

same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named "Mother" for the students.From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them.Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply.

4.

I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at te beginning and something unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink some water, and ate some food. After while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.

5.

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.

6.

In Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delighted. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.

7.

Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman,who had been teaching English for more than 20 years.She is always working hard.For a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. In class,she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possible. She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting.In her spare She In time,she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays.She loves us so much as she is always ready to help us.In the fact,she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.We all respect and love him. 8

The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center

downtown, and bought present for him. Then I took the subway train to home.

Sitting on the train, I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the

present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train

and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I hesitated for a moment, and then

offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seen her smile, I felt happily. I will always ready to help others in the future.

9.

I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London,where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

10.

One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing.

Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

11.

Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.

12.

The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

13. One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the

ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while,

I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to

her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.

14.

In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More and more school in China require students to take part community service during the vocations. Students are often seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.

短文改错答案

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2 but2 who5 hands 7 去掉for ∧first three9later

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6 Lucky---Luckily 7 rested---rest 8 drink---drank9 while前加a10 us---ourselves

5 1 made---makes 2 at---to3 movie---movies4去 the 5 How ---What

6 different.---differently7 go前加to8 fallen---fall9 keeping---kept 6 46去掉of

7去掉the 9 respects--- respect去掉7 4 speak前+to

短文改错新题型篇二:短文改错新题型6篇

短文改错新题型6篇

(1)

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room.

(2)

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.。 One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.

(3)

Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.

(4)

Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to

home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

(5)

I have recent been told that listening to loud music is gradual harming people’s hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party ,she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor one day.

(6)

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?

短文改错新题型6篇

(1)

Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air was hotter, and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window. As I ran out to catch them, big drop of rain began to fall. When I came

back into house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashing(碰撞的)sound from the back of the house. When I ran out to find that a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the back room.

1.a-the 2. sudden--suddenly 3 hotter---hot 4 is--was5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the

8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken

(2)

I have been planning to join in our college basketball team next year, so now I am spending as more time as I can with other people who likes to play. They are teaching me the most important rules and technologies of the game, and I am getting the better all the time. We have a neighborhood team that play against other teams in the area.。 One of my neighbors is helping rest of us improved our skills. Tonight we are playing against one of the best teams in the city, and I think we can win them if we won't make any mistakes.

(3)

Fang Tong is 34 years old, an actor, director and teacher of Beijing Opera Theatre. Most of her students are from other part of China and have come to Beijing at a very young age of sixteen or seventeen. He hopes create an environment for his students that it is much more relaxing than the one he used to study in. He thought that an actor should relax himself when performing. Yet his students deep respect him and he never needs to raise his voice in order to be hearing. For his opinion, actors should go on even when they feel they have made a mistake in their performances because the moment is already gone but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing and developing.

(4)

Today is Sunday, I have been studying all day long. On the morning, I had a dry breakfast. We have no water to drink because the water supply had cut off. The water come back in the evening. I did math then. I didn't stop after 12 o'clock. After a short lunch I had the break. Then I went to my Sunday English Class. After a long and tired class for more than two hours, I got to home. Some work had been done but some hadn't. I must review all my subject such as the Sciences, the Humanities, which include Chinese, English, Politics and History as well. That's terribly! Especially when there was no water.

(5)

I have recent been told that listening to loud music is gradual harming people’s hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party ,she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down, almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor one day.

(6)

Dear Ralph,

I'm a senior student. I have be in love with a boy for three years. But he is a shy boy, so I wrote him a letter firstly to express my feeling. And he wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study. Let us wait to see until we have any chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, asking him about go out . But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. How do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up Sheila?

6

1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going8. watched--watch9What10. and—or

Keys

1

1.a-the 2. sudden--suddenly 3 hotter---hot 4 is--was5. out--out of 6. drop—drops 7. house前加the

8. loudly---loud 9. 去掉when 10. broke—broken

2

1. 去掉in 2. more → much 3. likes → like4. technologies → techniques5. 去掉the 6. play → plays

7. rest前加the8. improved → improve9. win-beat 10. won't → don't

3

1.her-his 2. part- parts 3. a-the 4. hope∧to5 去掉 it 6. thought-thinks7. deep-deeply8. hearing-heard 9. For-In 10. but-and

4

1. On→In2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been 4.been5. after→until 6. the→a 7. tired→tiring8. 去掉to 9. subject→subjects 10. terribly→ terrible

5

1.recently 2.is 3. 去掉been 4. gave---gives5. isn't---doesn't6. in---to7. 去掉a8. with后加their9. trembled---trembling10. tail---tails

6

1. be--been 2. firstly--first 3. feeling—feelings4. study前加to 5. until-- if / whether 6. 去掉to 7. go--going8. watched--watch9What10. and—or

短文改错新题型篇三:2016广东改革新题型:短文改错技巧以及练习

短文改错新题型策略与技巧

归纳短文改错错误类型:

(一) 词法的测试

1.名词:主要是查名词是否可数,与其修饰语是否一致。

1) I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music.

2) Do exercises do good to our healthy.

3) Reading books is one of my hobby.

2. 代词:对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容及在句中的作用,注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致,常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。

1).He drove too fast, and the police stopped her.

前面提到的是he而后面却用her来代,故应将her改为him.

2).This is the best film which I have ever seen.

先行词前有最高级修饰应用关系代词that 而不是which。

3. 冠词:英语中只有三个冠词。

1) I meant to write letter and tell you all the things…

letter为可数名词,故write后应加a.

2) I like playing the football. 去the

3) He is a honest boy. a改为an

4. 介词:

1) I am writing to thank you with your kind help.

thank sb. for sth.为固定搭配,故应将with 改为for.

2) …I’m the happiest in all.此句想表达的意思是―我是所有人中最高兴的‖。故应将in改为 of.

3) Under the help of my father, I …under 改为 with

4) He went to Beijing in next Sunday.in 改为on

5. 形容词、副词:形容词、副词的误用主要指在该用形容词的地方用了副词,该用副词的地方用了形容词。改错行中出现形容词或副词时就要仔细分析该形容词或副词修饰什么,形式是否正确,是原级、比较级还是最高级。形容词、副词误用也是常考的改错项目之一。

1) I had not interest in English .interest

是名词,应用形容词no来修饰,而not是副词,副词不能修饰名

2) These are the happier girls I’ve ever seen.(NMET2007)

此处有I’ve ever seen限定,应用最高级,故happier应改为 happiest.

3) You can borrow a book very easy.easy 改为easily.

4) These books are very worth reading.用well 修饰

6. 连词:短文改错中出现连词就要判断连词用的是否正确,是否符合句子意思;连接的是词还是句子,是否符合逻辑关系。此外如果是平行结构就要注意前后时态、语态、词性一致问题平行结构常借助与并列连词and , or , but , not only…but also…, …not…but…, either…or…, neither …nor…, as well as等。

1) As it has been raining these days, so we have decided to put off our sports meeting. 由于前句有As引导原因状语从句,因此后句不能再用so,故应把so 去掉。

2) The population is growing, but the earth must support too many people.

根据上下文意思判断,前后两个并列分句不存在意义上的折,所以but应改为and或so.这是典型的并列连词误用。

7. 动词:动词错误在短文改错中所占比重最大,它所涉及的错误包括动词的时态、语态错误;易混动词的用法错误; 动词的第三人称单数错误;动词的非谓语形式,以及动词的句型搭配错误等。在改错题中,动词方面的考查比例较大。

1) 动词的时态、语态

a. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.

take photos动作发生在过去,应用过去时.

b. The book you borrowed from the library should returned in five days.

根据本句意义,should后应加上been,构成被动语态。

c. In school, I often playing football for my friends. playing改为 play; for 改为with

2) 易混动词使用错误

a. I persuaded him to stop smoking, but he didn’t listen.

persuade 意为―说服‖,强调成功的结果,而根据下句 he didn’t listen可知,劝说并没有成功,故应改persuaded为 advised.

b. You please rise your hands.

rise是不及物动词,而raise是及物动词,所以举手应用 raise your hands.这属于及物动词与不及物动词的误用。

3) 非谓语动词使用错误

a. We are looking forward to see you on the birthday party.

look forward to 中的to是介词,应加动名词,将see改为seeing.

b. I’m sorry I keep you wait for a long time .I got caught in the t(转 载于:wWw.zhAoQT.neT 蒲公 英文摘:短文改错新题型)raffic.

keep均和doing连用,如keep doing sth.; keep sb. (sth).doing sth. ;keep …from doing… 等.

c. I’d like to your pen friend, and get to know more about your country.

to后加be。因其后是名词,而不是动词原形,不能直接用to.

8. 词语固定搭配:

主要考查介词与动词、名词、形容词的固定搭配;副词、动词的固定搭配;及物动词后多介词或副词以及不及物动词后少介词,英语中的一些固定句型与习惯搭配等。

1) My teacher advised me to keep my diary.keep a diary是固定搭配,意思是―写日记‖.

2) In my surprise, he did very well in his previous job. To one’s surprise 是固定搭配

3) I thought that was dull to watch a game…此题考查it的功能,It + be + adj. + to do为固定结构。

4) …the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. 解析: not only… but also…为固定结构,故将and 改为but.

5) I have no difficulty learn maths.have difficulty (in) doing sth.为固定结构

6) He spends too much time play games. spend some time (in) doing sth.为固定结构 做题步骤:1.通读全文,获取大意。2,逐句修改。3. 带入答案复查。

一(2014同桌系的以下作文。10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

(一 辽宁卷)

Dear Jeremy and Alice,

Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.

We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are.

We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.

二(2014陕西卷)

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

三(2014四川卷)

Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.

四(2014新课标I)

Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!

五(2014浙江卷 )

I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern

to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.

Learning English is great importance. English is widely used all over the world. It was often used in the international meetings. Most business letters are written in English. With a help of English we can learn modern science and technology from the developed countries. We can also introduce our achievement and experiences to other countries. Because of their importance, English is a requiring subject in high schools and colleges. Now many people are working hardly at English. It’s very important to learn English well. If we learn English well, we can serve for our country better. So I suggest most Chinese can learn it well.

Locate in Conghua, the Temple, which covers and area of 900 square meters, are said to be built between 1426 and 1435. After it was first built, much big repairs, were done in different dynasties, seven of them were recorded in words. This is first discovery of ancient buildings in our province with exact times. To let it survive, local villagers and government treasures the grand relic and protect it with great care and repair it when is necessary. Because of their great efforts, in 2003, when the Temple was given first prize as cultural relic protection from the UN.

I eager to go to college because I know there is so many to learn about the world and about human beings. Knowledge is source of pleasure for me. I want to study at a college for the fun to knowledge; I know college education can prepares me better for my future. Better education mean, more often then not, better jobs, better opportunities and better choices. I want to go to college because I know that our parents and other people care for me will be happy with that. Unless I can study at a nice university, I will make them happy. I’d like not let them down. That’s why I must go to college.

Grain, which is used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a more important role. On the other hand, meat and fish has increased rapidly. The changes in diet can be accounted by three main reason. First, people are much wealthier than before. By higher income, they can afford to buy good foods. Secondly, people have realized the importance of balanced diet to their health. Lack in certain amount of meat, for example, will result in poor health. Finally, because of the economic reform, meat, chicken, fish or milk, which were scarce in the past, were produced in large quantities now. we believe that as far as the effort continues in reform and development, there will be greater changes in people’s diet in the future.

My mother is a village woman, who is already in fifties. She had very little education, and she knows knowledge is of very importance to young people. She often asks me how I get along with my studies and encourages me study hard. My mother does everything she can for me so that I can spend more time with my study. Once she was bad ill and had stayed in bed for several days. When I got home, I found the light was still off and mother was sitting in bed, made new clothes for me! I was so deeply moved that tear came to my eyes. So is my mother, a kind and hard-working woman.

一 .1.【答案】wanted后面加to

【试题解析】固定搭配want to do sth想要做某事;to是不能省略的,不定式to do sth作为want的宾语。

2. 【答案】come改为came

【试题解析】根据本文第一句可知讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时,所以使用came。

3. 【答案】have改为having

【试题解析】本句中动词have与句子主语we构成逻辑上的主动关系,所以使用现在分词在句中做状语。

4. 【答案】immediate改为immediately

【试题解析】本句中应该使用副词immeately来修饰谓语动词jumped,在句中做状语。形容词immediate不能做状语。

5. 【答案】on改为at

【试题解析】固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介词on。At表示瞄准的对方或者方向。

6. 【答案】Neither改为none

【试题解析】代词neither表示两者都不…;而本句中没有提及两者,应该是有很多的鸟。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。

7. 【答案】was改为were

【试题解析】本句的主语是复数名词arrows,所以谓语动词使用复数形式were。 8 【答案】去掉were或者looked

【试题解析】本句是指箭如雨下,要么使用look like看起来像..;要么使用be like…像…一样。

9. 【答案】but改为and

【试题解析】我们四处逃跑,很幸运的是没有人受伤。根据上下文语境可知表示并列关系。

10. 【答案】a改为an

【试题解析】后面的形容词impressive是以元音开始的,所以使用an。

二 去掉had 本文叙述的是过去发生的一件事情,不需要使用过去完成时,因为过去完成时表示的是过去的过去的事情。句意:我注意到车厢里很吵闹都是人。

2.noise改为noisy 本句中应该使用形容词noisy和系动词was构成系表结构,修饰车里当时的情况。同时noisy与后面的形容词短语filled with…构成并列关系。

3.comes改为came 因为本文讲述的是过去发生的事情,所以使用一般过去时的时态。列车员过来检票。

4.but改为and 句意:一位乘客找不到自己的票,很难受。上下文之间是顺接关系,所以使用and。But表示上下文之间的转折关系。

5.searching后面加for 根据句意可知每个人都帮助他找票。固定搭配search for sth寻找sth;

6.his改为its/the 句意:这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的。Its指代the ticket。

7.a改为the 使用定冠词the特指上文提及的同一事物,本文中特指前面提及的那张票。

8.previoes改为previously 本句中应该使用副词previously作状语,修饰谓语动词。

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